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Journal Entry: Sun Oct 30, 2011, 5:41 PM
Character: Yume Ishimaru
[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[x] They are physically strong
[] They have a rare hair/fur color
[] Their eyes are an unusual color
[] This happens to be red
[] Their eyes change color
[] They have wings
[x] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[] They are immortal
[x] (If female) They have large boobs (This is the Amber option.)
[] (If male) They are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[x] They are a healer
[x] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[x] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They ran away from home
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[x] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death
[] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[] They have lots of friends/no friends(in the middle somewhere?)
[] They are emo/cutesy
[x] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[x] They are currently in a relationship
[] They have lots if morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities
[x] They are very intelligent
[] They have hallucinations
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[x] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit
[] They have a 'special type' of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[] Some part of their body glows
[] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstice etc.
[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[] They are connected with a certain element
[] They are connected with a certain animal
[] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type
[] They cry blood
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[] They are from a different country to where they live
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[] They are very lively/happy
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[x] They are very patient
[x] They are from a long line of (insert profession/power here)
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them (or blessing, depending on how you look at it...)
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are 'the chosen one'
[] They have insomnia

Overall points: 13

<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^

6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26< -Mary-Sue
Do I even need to talk about it?


Yay Yume's not a sue xD

  • Mood: Glad
  • Listening to: Sweet Silence
  • Reading: Private Messages
  • Watching: Youtube
  • Playing: Tales Of Symphonia (First One)
  • Eating: Nothing
  • Drinking: Pepsi

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